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Showing posts with label persuasive writing. Show all posts

Monday, 2 September 2013

Factories

We are learning to persuade people to not build a factory on our courts.

I believe that having a factory is awful.

We should not have a factory because we won't be able to play on the courts.We need  courts because we can't play basketball if the courts are gone! we won't be fit and healthy.If we are not healthy we will get fat.

The factory might have smoke and the little kids could get sick because it will make them die early.Also we could not concentrate because we can smell the smoke and we will cough alot.

When parents will find a school for their children they will see the smoke from the factory and they won't send their children to our school.We should have students because we want to meet them and the school could be gone forever, if there is no students.

Having a factory is yuck we won't have the courts, smoke is yuck we won't have a school.